Blog Post#4

1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?

There are two things that I learned by the comments. First is grammer. Actually, in the first homework, I was confused whether I put 'ing' on the verb. As expected, I received comments about that part so I can know the correct grammer. Second is importance of visual. I only concerned about writing so I forgot that visual point is also crucial part. I can realize that visual elements like picuters can help the writer's understanding. However, I cannot reflect this point in my midterm writing so I left with regret. In the future, I will try to reflect these points to my writing to write better.

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing

I often comments about details. I really intersted to read other blogs but I usually thought that it is better when it has more details. Therefore, I learned that more details lead to more interests from the reader and can help the understanding.

Advantages of taking the subway.

There are three advantages of taking the subway. First, the subway is reliable. The subway always comes in same time so we can arrive at the destination in the estimated time to take the subway on time. However, the bus or car is sometimes in the traffic congestion so we can late for a destination. In addition to the morning hours, the road is blocked so car and bus have difficult to move but the subway is not blocked any time because determined number of it operates on the each time. Therefore, using the subway is faster than using the bus although it is full of people so we feel uncomfortable. Second, the subway is cheap. The subway cost for adult is 1150 won and there are subways in Seoul anywhere. Therefore, we can go just about anywhere in the Seoul. For example, we can go to the Gapyeong from Sejong University by taking the Line 7 in Sejong station and getting off in SangBong station and transferring to the Gyeongchun Line. Third, the subway is convenient. I do not have to drive it because the subway driver moves it. If I am sitting comfortably, I have arrived at the destination so we can sleep, study and read in the subway. In brief, the subway is reliable, cheap and convenient.